Saturday, January 16, 2016

about beadle glitter

beadleglitterlive begins with an almost truly dynamic post - really, it's completely cool, and that's the actual objective, and then there's a fun and eye catching post following that, which is, though, despite myself, a little wordy ... just a bit. So, you can see the problem. And then after that are quite a number of text posts, which are at least colorful, and which maybe tend to be on important topics, and some of which are actually concise ... but, definintely, they're problematic.
Maybe I need to do some serious editing.

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